In other news, while searching for a writing device I picked up a regular pencil for the first time in forever. It made me consider which is better for the environment: wooden pencils that kill trees, or mechanical pencils (in which plastic is a negative, but they are refillable). Just the sort of random thoughts I have.






Well,uh except the restricted parts.
But on the happier note,I was glad to go through your writing.
The best ones are those in which you put the subject and revealed it to the reader in a few yet strong sentences.
That is what I really appreciate.
And tell you what,your descriptions of nature about sea,mountains,those are inspiring.
This is what you are best at.
I tell you this,as a reader.
Your words have an effect.Go on let those pictures of rivers and skies form in your reader's minds.
Good day.
And I hope you find your answer.
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Work?
Work?
Work?
Stop.
And listen to the voice inside.
A gust strikes the sand
and the ground blurs with the sky,
as dunes reproach the bold courtship
with whirling dusty dance
all about the bewildered air.
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"Now that you have your freedom, how will you hide it from robbers?"-Ho Chi Zen
As always.
Nature and it's wonders.
Great job.Great job!
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Work?
Work?
Work?
Stop.
And listen to the voice inside.
I admire that.
And well,I would be very soon looking through your entire gallery.
You,have a fan.
Stay safe and good day!
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Work?
Work?
Work?
Stop.
And listen to the voice inside.
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"Now that you have your freedom, how will you hide it from robbers?"-Ho Chi Zen
Good day!
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Work?
Work?
Work?
Stop.
And listen to the voice inside.
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1+1=0
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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
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