

The Pale GrassI've been wanting to tell you something. Remember how you said the only thing holding us apart was your little lady friend? Well, she's a cheating whore. But now you're skipping town and I can't drop the good bad news. How could I ruin this day like that while the two of you weep together? I can only do the noble thing and watch you, and my chance at you dissipate in the wind just like that. I have to hold my composure- be the good friend I am, even if I wanted more.The Pale Grass
How were you to know I climbed into my tree (where you used to tease


Urban HaikuA cigarette butt lays on the table outside soaked in summer rain.Urban Haiku


FootstepsThey see where others have walked, trails crossing trails left before. Is there hope in footsteps colliding where hearts never came together?Footsteps


LiberLost on the streets with a self-sure swagger-- hungering, hungering, hungering for the next fix of their chosen deconstruction. Unknowing Buddhists making their unmaking. How easy this "I" is consumed in the art of autoimmolation. This fire is freedom, molotov liberation from ourselves.Liber


Remember leaves of seasonsAutumn leaves rumpled and crushed by waiting storms, Wet footsteps guided along as the light falls, That remembrance reflected through,calling quietly, Setting days, drowned,in the sea of grey eyes.Remember leaves of seasons


Three YearsOne hundred thirteen million, Six hundred and seven thousand, Three hundred and sixty - Heartbeats.Three Years


Cinema FoodcourtGuy in a dark fleece jacket sits in the cinema foodcourt, reading alone, fingering his cellCinema Foodcourt
though her number isnt on it, though he wouldnt call regardless,
knowing he must stay a stranger
still, he pauses, and sees her in the privacy of his own mind, odd smile, forest green scarf wrapped thick round her neck: he thinks she looks lovely and stubborn and brave, he daydreams to animate her
while the foodcourt bench etches squares into his forearm with its greasy brown tiles, and overhead neon lights flash


I noticed a ring on my fingerII noticed a ring on my finger
Swallow bird feathers raw like empty caricatures
of unfilled bodies. Watch the swallows streak across blackwater puddles and gulls dip white wings in oily waves.
Swallow the sea-salt and riptide currents and bones.
II
The distance between the beach and city-linoleum kitchen: five feet. Magazine on counter, cabinet against the knee, neck and head strung from shoulders.
Steps from the door; your lilac lips.
III
You are my cat, my Schrödinger experiment, my nihili
| A key interest of mine is spiritual discipline, which I exercise through various activities such as meditation and vegetarianism. I'm a great fan of Ginsberg and Whitman, and their voice often informs my poetry. For other worthwhile facts I am:very queer, a curry-fiend, a psychonaut, and a coffee-lover (French press, generally). I am gifted to live in the beautiful Blue Ridge Mountains of Appalachia and they inspire me every day of my life. I don't know what I'd do if I was separated from my towering rocky muses. |
Well,uh except the restricted parts.
But on the happier note,I was glad to go through your writing.
The best ones are those in which you put the subject and revealed it to the reader in a few yet strong sentences.
That is what I really appreciate.
And tell you what,your descriptions of nature about sea,mountains,those are inspiring.
This is what you are best at.
I tell you this,as a reader.
Your words have an effect.Go on let those pictures of rivers and skies form in your reader's minds.
Good day.
And I hope you find your answer.
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Work?
Work?
Work?
Stop.
And listen to the voice inside.
A gust strikes the sand
and the ground blurs with the sky,
as dunes reproach the bold courtship
with whirling dusty dance
all about the bewildered air.
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"Now that you have your freedom, how will you hide it from robbers?"-Ho Chi Zen
As always.
Nature and it's wonders.
Great job.Great job!
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Work?
Work?
Work?
Stop.
And listen to the voice inside.
I admire that.
And well,I would be very soon looking through your entire gallery.
You,have a fan.
Stay safe and good day!
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Work?
Work?
Work?
Stop.
And listen to the voice inside.
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"Now that you have your freedom, how will you hide it from robbers?"-Ho Chi Zen
Good day!
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Work?
Work?
Work?
Stop.
And listen to the voice inside.
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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
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